Society expects women to uphold
impossible standards, especially in regards to our bodies. Although our
expectations are currently shifting away from the idea that women need to be
impossibly thin, women still feel pressure to be just thin enough while also being
curvy in the right places. Being a gymnast for nine years, I never really
thought about what I ate since I worked out for four hours a day. Even though
some of my friends would fret about what they consumed, I never concerned
myself with the idea for too long since I would soon be back in the gym.
However, this changed once I quit after ninth grade.
After I quit, I regularly heard
the saying that gymnasts are the athletes that always gain the most weight
after they finish their careers. Not only did my mom constantly remind me to be
careful what I ate, but also I suddenly became aware of how much my friends
would eat during lunch at school or when we would go out to dinner. This sudden
shift in my life finally made my cognizant of what the rest of the non-gymnast
women population thinks and feels in regards to food. I finally understood the
hate part of a woman’s love-hate relationship with food.
Good job! If you were to revise this post, you could say a little more about how society generally causes women to have a "love-hate relationship" with food; how does this relationship come about? (i.e. where have you heard the saying that "gymnasts are the athletes that always gain the most weight" from: was it from friends? the media? journal articles? etc.)
ReplyDeleteGreat job overall.
Grade: Check