It is eight-thirty in the morning, an
early time for me to be woken up on a weekend, especially at our lake house. As
my mom opens the door to my room, she says, “Brittany, it’s time for some
waffles!” Excitement rushes over me. Ever since I could eat solid food, waffles
have been my favorite. My grandma got the recipe from her grandma, making them better than the Eggo waffles
other kids would eat on their Saturday mornings. The aroma of batter cooking in
the waffle iron combined with the scent of maple syrup made it the perfect
thing to wake up to, but when I walk up the stairs on this particular morning, that
divine scent never hits me. Confused, I enter the kitchen to see all the
ingredients laid out on the counter.
“Wait, I thought you said waffles were
ready,” I grumbled at my mom, upset she woke me up early when the waffles were
not even close to being ready.
“I thought you could make them! You know your
grandpa loves it when you make them for the family,” says my mom.
Knowing that turning around, walking back
down the stairs, and falling back to sleep was not an option, I continue into
the kitchen to make the batter for the waffles. Although you probably wouldn’t believe
mixing up some eggs, flour, milk, and baking soda could be considered troublesome
or tedious cooking, on this particular morning, I utterly dreaded having to do
this. Maybe it was because I had to wake up “early” on the weekend, or maybe it
was because my mom forced me to make them, as opposed to me choosing to do it
myself; however, it was something I was not fond of having to do that morning.
I
grumpily grab a bowl to mix up all the ingredients, wishing I was asleep like
the rest of my cousins. After
about fifteen minutes, I finish making the batter. At this point, I cannot
believe how hungry I am, so I plug in the waffle iron.
“Brit, you know you have to let that sit
for twenty minutes before you make them, so they get nice and fluffy, right?”
says my mom as she walks by, grabbing more coffee.
“You put in extra vanilla extract, too,
right?” says my grandpa, after hearing I was done making the batter. “You know
that’s what makes them so great!”
Every “right?” I heard made me want to
scream. Every reminder I got made me want to escape back to my room. Every minute I waited made
me want to fall back asleep. The twenty minutes eventually pass, and I can finally
make the waffles. I pour the impeccable batter into the steaming waffle iron,
turn it over, and wait for the
light to turn on to indicate it’s ready. When
that light flashes on, I turn it over to reveal the perfect waffle.
I head to the table to sit down with my waffle,
to make all my not-so-hard work worth it. Just as I set the waffle down on the
table, my grandpa says, “Oh! The first waffle’s ready!” He then devours my
perfect waffle in less than two minutes.
“That little bit of extra vanilla extract
made them perfect,” says my grandpa. “You know how to make them exactly how I
like ‘em. Thanks, Brit.”
“I want the next one!” says my aunt.
Unhappily, I make my aunt the next
waffle. The following waffles then go to all my cousins, and then the rest of
my aunts, uncles, and my parents have some. The more waffles I make, the more annoyed
and the hungrier I become. While I love seeing my family enjoy the waffles I worked
hard to make, all I want to do is eat one myself.
Making waffles for my family on Saturday
mornings at our lake house eventually becomes a tradition. I would wake up at
eight-thirty to make the batter, so the waffles could be on the table by nine
for family breakfast. I stand by the waffle iron, cooking everyone’s waffles, and
I get a big thanks once everyone was done eating and a big hug from my grandpa,
which almost makes getting up before ten on the weekend worth it.
By the end, there is just enough batter
to make myself a waffle. I grab this final waffle, some syrup, and a glass of
milk, walk out to the porch, sit down, and finally eat my waffle, looking out
on the lake.
Good job with your revision. I think your transition between "all I want to do is eat one myself" and "Making waffles for my family..." could be a little smoother, although you do use the transitional word "eventually."
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