Before
today, I was already stressed about everything I have during finals week: a Spanish
exam, biology exam, chemistry exam, English final portfolio, food blog, and a
biography project is a lot to do. However, sitting in health class this morning,
I realize I have two presentations, one for my health class and one on my final
biography project for my freshman seminar, and my biology lab practical and
exam all in one day right after Thanksgiving break is over. An overwhelming feeling
of stress comes over me as that realization dawns on me, and suddenly all I
crave is sweet, luscious, comforting Nutella to calm my nerves. All of the
sudden, a new pie comes to me. I’m calling it Fearful for Finals Pie. It’s a
pie with a graham cracker crust filled with indulgent Nutella and topped with sliced
bananas, made especially for any stress-eater about to go through anxious times
during exams.
Grade: Check (I think you could focus more on the pie, and weave your reasons/explanation of the situation/final exams stress throughout; overall, however, solid job!)
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